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“Have I told you how beautiful you look tonight?," Antonio asked, gazing and (Name) from across the table.

“I think you have,” (Name) blushed. She felt like a kid again, as she hadn’t been on a date since she got the boys. Most men were scared by the extra baggage that two young boys brought along. But here was a man who not only didn't mind, but was excited to get to know them.  Little did (Name) know just how much together time Antonio and Lovino and Feliciano were going to get very soon.

-Outside the restaurant in an unsuspecting van-

Lovino cursed softly as he watched his mamma smiled at the Spaniard through binoculars. This would be so much easier if she wasn't so glad. As much as Lovino wanted his mamma’s happiness, he just knew that as soon as women found their man, out the window went the kids, literally.

“Is this legal?” Ludwig questions from the driver’s seat.

“Enough,” Lovino snapped.

“Ja, burder, has some fun,” Unfortunately where Ludwig went, his brother Gilbert followed.  As obnoxious as he was, he helped convinced Ludwig to go on this surveillance mission.

“Lovi, what are we waiting for?” Feli questioned.

“The right moment,” Lovino said, without taking his eyes off the pair in the restaurant. Just then his mother laughed and Antonio put his hand on (Name)’s. Then (Name) got up and left the table, to go to the bathroom.

“Which is when?” Feli whined; he was getting bored.

“Now!” Lovino yelled. Ludwig and Gilbert got out of the car; they were dressed the same as the waiters of the restaurant. They walked in with a cloth covered cart, which Lovino and Feli hid in. They blended perfectly, since when do you ever notice waiters? They wheeled up to (Name) and Antonio’s table.

“Special order,” Gilbert smiled at the poor unsuspecting Spaniard.

“But we didn’t order anything yet?”  Antonio looked at the two waiters, confused.

“Yes you did, you m*th*rf*ck*r,” Lovino pulled Antonio under the table, so they were hidden by the table cloth from the rest of the restaurant.

“Somehow, I am not surprised to see you here, but I expected you to jump me when I walked her to the door,” Antonio looked at the two little Italian boys.

“That was plan B,” Feli smiled cheerfully.

“Listen up, you b*st*rd. You are going to leave the restaurant and never talk to our mamma ever again,” Lovino said in his scariest voice. Antonio fought the shiver in his spine.

“Or else,” Feli added, happily.

“I’m afraid that I’m here until your mother sends me away, I like her too much to just give up,” Antonio smiled, thinking of how long it took for him to get you to accept his invitation for this date.  

Lovino respected him for not being scared off to easily, but now he had an idea, a very evil idea. He heard Gilbert’s little bird coo three times, which was the signal that (Name) was returning. Lovino grabbed some catsup from the table and smeared some on his and Feli’s arm, till it left a red mark. Then he put him arm and Feli’s arm in one of Antonio’s arms and before he could do anything, Lovino pulled all three out from beneath the table. The faced (Name), who was surprised to see not only the boys, but their babysitters here. Lovino stepped on Feli’s toes, causing his to start crying and started to tear up himself.

“Mamma!” Feli cried.

“He hurt us!” Lovino pulled his arm out of the stunned Antonio’s grasp and showed (Name) the red mark. Feli went to hug (Name), incidentally showing to catsup on his arm to. (Name) looked open mouthed, shocked, and frantically over the boys. Antonio didn’t know what to say. If he denied it, who would (Name) believe, her kids or him? After a few tense minutes, (Name) hugged them both closely and gave Antonio the worst look.

“Gil, Ludwig, take the boys to the car and wait for me,” (Name) said, not looking at either of the babysitters. As Lovino walked away he stuck his tongue out at Antonio, who was pale.

“Chica,” he tried, pleadingly. But she held up her hand to silence him.

“I never want to see you again. If you ever come near the boys or me again, I will have you arrested or have my brother Ivan make you disappear,” (Name) usually never threatened or mentioned her mob boss of a brother, but this situation called for it. (Name) turned on her heel and walked out, leaving a heartbroken Antonio.
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Thank you for all the comments and votes to make this a series! :iconthankyouplz:

Man, Lovino can be scary :iconlovinoplz: and poor spain :iconsadspainplz:

I own nothing, but you and the next part is coming soon! :la:
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HetaliaLoverGirl18 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  New member Student Artist
ParkerDouglas Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  New member Student Digital Artist
Can you please make a third I'm hooked on this story and im just DIEING to know what happens next.
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Poor Toni.... I'm sorry! 
1stYaoiFanatic Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
You can't just end it there!!!! ;-; I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RelikandPiksel Featured By Owner Edited Oct 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I would have checked to see if it was actually blood or not. XD
SofiaPotter Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Writer
I can't wait!
Soul1991 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
Part 3 !!!
ForeverShipKukamu Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Squeeee my brother's Russia *hand spasms* ahem, get it together me *slaps own cheek* when will the next chappie be out? XD
Tairulz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... poor Antonio T.T

Good story! Will there be a part 3? *hopeful look*
HetaliaYaoi101 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student Writer
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