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“Have I told you how beautiful you look tonight?," Antonio asked, gazing and (Name) from across the table.

“I think you have,” (Name) blushed. She felt like a kid again, as she hadn’t been on a date since she got the boys. Most men were scared by the extra baggage that two young boys brought along. But here was a man who not only didn't mind, but was excited to get to know them.  Little did (Name) know just how much together time Antonio and Lovino and Feliciano were going to get very soon.

-Outside the restaurant in an unsuspecting van-

Lovino cursed softly as he watched his mamma smiled at the Spaniard through binoculars. This would be so much easier if she wasn't so glad. As much as Lovino wanted his mamma’s happiness, he just knew that as soon as women found their man, out the window went the kids, literally.

“Is this legal?” Ludwig questions from the driver’s seat.

“Enough,” Lovino snapped.

“Ja, burder, has some fun,” Unfortunately where Ludwig went, his brother Gilbert followed.  As obnoxious as he was, he helped convinced Ludwig to go on this surveillance mission.

“Lovi, what are we waiting for?” Feli questioned.

“The right moment,” Lovino said, without taking his eyes off the pair in the restaurant. Just then his mother laughed and Antonio put his hand on (Name)’s. Then (Name) got up and left the table, to go to the bathroom.

“Which is when?” Feli whined; he was getting bored.

“Now!” Lovino yelled. Ludwig and Gilbert got out of the car; they were dressed the same as the waiters of the restaurant. They walked in with a cloth covered cart, which Lovino and Feli hid in. They blended perfectly, since when do you ever notice waiters? They wheeled up to (Name) and Antonio’s table.

“Special order,” Gilbert smiled at the poor unsuspecting Spaniard.

“But we didn’t order anything yet?”  Antonio looked at the two waiters, confused.

“Yes you did, you m*th*rf*ck*r,” Lovino pulled Antonio under the table, so they were hidden by the table cloth from the rest of the restaurant.

“Somehow, I am not surprised to see you here, but I expected you to jump me when I walked her to the door,” Antonio looked at the two little Italian boys.

“That was plan B,” Feli smiled cheerfully.

“Listen up, you b*st*rd. You are going to leave the restaurant and never talk to our mamma ever again,” Lovino said in his scariest voice. Antonio fought the shiver in his spine.

“Or else,” Feli added, happily.

“I’m afraid that I’m here until your mother sends me away, I like her too much to just give up,” Antonio smiled, thinking of how long it took for him to get you to accept his invitation for this date.  

Lovino respected him for not being scared off to easily, but now he had an idea, a very evil idea. He heard Gilbert’s little bird coo three times, which was the signal that (Name) was returning. Lovino grabbed some catsup from the table and smeared some on his and Feli’s arm, till it left a red mark. Then he put him arm and Feli’s arm in one of Antonio’s arms and before he could do anything, Lovino pulled all three out from beneath the table. The faced (Name), who was surprised to see not only the boys, but their babysitters here. Lovino stepped on Feli’s toes, causing his to start crying and started to tear up himself.

“Mamma!” Feli cried.

“He hurt us!” Lovino pulled his arm out of the stunned Antonio’s grasp and showed (Name) the red mark. Feli went to hug (Name), incidentally showing to catsup on his arm to. (Name) looked open mouthed, shocked, and frantically over the boys. Antonio didn’t know what to say. If he denied it, who would (Name) believe, her kids or him? After a few tense minutes, (Name) hugged them both closely and gave Antonio the worst look.

“Gil, Ludwig, take the boys to the car and wait for me,” (Name) said, not looking at either of the babysitters. As Lovino walked away he stuck his tongue out at Antonio, who was pale.

“Chica,” he tried, pleadingly. But she held up her hand to silence him.

“I never want to see you again. If you ever come near the boys or me again, I will have you arrested or have my brother Ivan make you disappear,” (Name) usually never threatened or mentioned her mob boss of a brother, but this situation called for it. (Name) turned on her heel and walked out, leaving a heartbroken Antonio.
Here is the much asked for squeal to [link]

Thank you for all the comments and votes to make this a series! :iconthankyouplz:

Man, Lovino can be scary :iconlovinoplz: and poor spain :iconsadspainplz:

I own nothing, but you and the next part is coming soon! :la:
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:iconem11104:
em11104 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015
Poor Toni! Why would Lovi do something like that! When is the next chapter?!?!?!?!
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MissCrystalNobody Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  New member
*freaking out* *screaming* OMIGOD!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconneko-lucifer:
Neko-Lucifer Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
GODAMMIT LOVINO WHY
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:iconfirederpducky:
FireDerpDucky Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
QAQ LOVINO. NO.
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aj123456123456 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
next part soon
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Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
Poor SPAIN!! ;A;
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:iconelyanaxlevilove:
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Edited Dec 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
dude poor spain uuuhhhhh roma and feli Y U RUIN MAH DATE???!!!!y u no 
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ParkerDouglas Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
PART THREEE PLEASE!!!!😦
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:iconhetalialovergirl18:
HetaliaLoverGirl18 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Student Artist
PART THREE PLZ
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:iconparkerdouglas:
ParkerDouglas Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Can you please make a third I'm hooked on this story and im just DIEING to know what happens next.
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AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Poor Toni.... I'm sorry! 
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1stYaoiFanatic Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You can't just end it there!!!! ;-; I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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RelikandPiksel Featured By Owner Edited Oct 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I would have checked to see if it was actually blood or not. XD
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SofiaPotter Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Writer
I can't wait!
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Soul1991 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
Part 3 !!!
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ForeverShipKukamu Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Squeeee my brother's Russia *hand spasms* ahem, get it together me *slaps own cheek* when will the next chappie be out? XD
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Tairulz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... poor Antonio T.T

Good story! Will there be a part 3? *hopeful look*
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HetaliaYaoi101 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student Writer
UPDATE AUTHOR-SAN PLEASE
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SunnySunshine203 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
=亼= ? PLS MORE I DONT WANT TONI TO BE LIKE THIS :(
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candythekiller8105 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
What?
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:iconabsoluteanimeaddict:
absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Writer
OMG OMG OMG i need the next part
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:iconqwin104:
qwin104 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student General Artist
....I don't know about that. I don't trust kids at all, considering my niece is only three, and she looks exactly like Romano, brown eyes, brown hair, and she's only three, and she told me to fuck off. I love kids, I love kids as much as Spain, but I don't believe them at all...
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tsundere17 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Romano is fabulous xD
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:iconemzyblue:
emzyblue Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
Write more-zies!! PLEASHH!!
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Zz43110zZ Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
Write more please ! ^-^ Why 
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anonymous2003 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Writer
:iconfeelsplz: but its awesome! :iconmoarplz: please
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Hetaliamusicdrama1 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfeelsplz:
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Norwayfan17 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014   General Artist
More
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heinz56kid Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
MORE PLEASE xd
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Rmstar01 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Um more please.Waaaah! 
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Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
AH HELLZ NAH WERE IS PART 3 FUUUUUUUU
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MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Dang... A MIDDLE SCHOOL-ER CAN BE THE FREAKING SCARIEST THING EVER.
But that was awesome
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PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Will there be a part 3?
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PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Is this legal? I ask myself that every time I babysit my siblings, or go shopping with them.
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angel-of-hetalia Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student General Artist
- Outside the restaurant in an unsuspecting van-

My first thought: That van probably looks very suspicious... :iconconspiracykeanuplz:
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VargasLovesPasta Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
How it should have been

Spain: Chica... *wipes the ketchup off of Feliciano's arm* taste it, tell me if it blood

*hour later of talking*
They all lived happily ever after

*cue france*

FUUUUUUUU
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Hetaliamusicdrama1 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyushplz:
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deannafiske Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Awww I feel bad for spain
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TheAmazingBookWorm Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Continue soon plz
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justaregulartomato Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
Aww. . . MORE PLEASE!!!
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lolamanny Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spain! D:
Bad Lovi!
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Horse-head-girl Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spain ;^; poor thing </3
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naomiphantomhive1 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Student General Artist
.....T^T poor Spain......
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doughnutz007 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Sooo good! I love this story!
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Dragons3195 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Poor spain.. XD But I loved how jumping him at the door was plan B.
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jeffthekillerlove12 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
EuE LOL chu iz sho mean lovino Dx eue but I love vhu
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little-raving-kitty Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVINO WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO MEAN
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RidingDragonGirl Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student Filmographer
Please make this into a LONGER SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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demoniic-angel2 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

THAT WAS AWESOME!

Make this into a longer series maybe? please?

AND YUESsS!
BIG BRUDER IVAN!!!!
that is just so boss.

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Mikefangirl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
I've always wanted Ivan as a big brother :D.
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